Montag, 24. September 2012

Artifact


The Story of my Artifact:




Ma artifact is a heart, from my friend, who is im Germany. The heart connects me to her and my other friends from germany. This heart connects me to my “group” of friends, which I know since I am in “Grundschule”. These friends I know since I am really small, so I have a lot of storys connected with them. So once she sended me this photo to me and it connects us!



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2 Kommentare:

  1. Unknown27. September 2012 um 08:41

    Hi Mia :)

    It an adorable story :) But I think you could have made it a little longer, so we can understand better why is it so significant for you.

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  2. Unknown27. September 2012 um 09:59

    Structure: I like how you said how it made you feel. It could be a little longer.
    Content: I don't know what "Grundschule" is so that could be explained a little more. Overall it was nice and sweet. (:

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